First Shoot/Edit, Tips (Be Harsh)

hey, i just did my first shoot and just edited it, can someone give me tips?Shutter: 1/100 ISO:100 F:4.2 15-55m Lens . (I Personally Think Grass Is Too Yellow)https://ift.tt/2Me5Hv4 via /r/photography https://ift.tt/2METyf0